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Baby Come Back |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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*This has absolutely nothing to do with me on a personal level. I wrote this the other night, and I am stil wondering where it came from*  ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Baby why’d you leave me You know I love you so Baby, please come back I just can’t let you go Baby my skies got cloudy And turned my blue to grey ……this ache in my heart It won’t go away Of all the loves My heart has ever known You are the one I wanted most The one I never tried to own Baby, come back Say we can love like we did before Baby you’re my everything The only one I could adore Baby, don’t leave me here So alone like this Baby I’m begging Just one more kiss Of all the loves My heart has ever held onto You are the only one The only one that ever really knew Baby you know my secrets My midnight fantasy Baby I just want you Want you here with me Baby, my heart is breaking I’m down on bended knee Baby, please, I love you Please come back to me ~SEA~ |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Wow, you have a good imagination! I sometimes do that too, write about situations that have nothing to do with me at the moment : ) |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely Sea...It just aches with longing. Enjoyed! ~Time has cast a spell on you |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Sea, glad you aren't in that situation...heartfelt penned. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
and I would say that at some time in your life you've felt this on a personal level...to put such emotion into your poetry. Beautiful. |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
This poem sounds like it came from the heart...I truly liked it. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
So now you are writing my experiences...the sad part is that in most cases they don't place much value in your plea...they have already made a decision cast in stone...I've done it both ways...when they said they were leaving on some occasions I begged them not too and on some I just said goodbye..neither seems to work..the other night a woman that had just given me her phone number ask for the number back about fifteen minutes later and I was reaaching in my pocket for it and I suddenly said no...and you know what...I think thats the reponse she wanted...what do I know..James |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
Sea, There are some things poets have to write about even if it is not part of their life... I think romantics can feel it in others work and have to express it sometimes....where did it come from? Reading in Passions! *S* The poem I did "I can't see me without you" was written as seen through the eyes of a friend....we have to get out of the comfort zone to grow sometimes Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. [This message has been edited by The Rusty Knight (edited 09-08-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ When those muses bring it ... sing it ~ Someone's waiting for the song~ Touchy-feely poetry~  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Baby! I'm back ... Don't roll your eyes at me you sang and I responded Oh! you were expecting ... LJ or Balladeer ... anyone but me  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I couldn't help but think of the song with the same name when I read this. . . do you know it?? Baby come back Any kind of fool could see there was something in everyting about you. . . great job SEA. . . and as for where it came from. . . who knows with what voices our muses speak??? --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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