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Open Poetry #15

Confusion

Apachecat906
Member

since 2001-09-04

Posts 217
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2001-09-07 12:58 PM

Without further explanation
Let me explain who I am and why
I need you to understand that
My life doesn't make sense

Tell me please what you think
about my thoughts and if
in the end you can see
where the beginning was?

Alicat
Member Elite

since 1999-05-23

Posts 4094
Coastal Texas

1 posted 2001-09-07 02:41 PM

Well, this might be a bit of a silly answer, but I'd hazard a guess that 'where the beginning was' is 'Without further explanation'...but that prolly don't make much sense.

Welcome again to PiP, and I hope you enjoy your time here.

Alicat

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2001-09-07 02:46 PM

Oh this is very good!! I enjoy this style of writing. Now...I shall have to sit and ponder this one the rest of the afternoon!! Good write and welcome to Passions.

~Time has cast a spell on you
so you won't ever forget me~

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

3 posted 2001-09-08 03:43 PM

This is very good! Mutifaceted and thought provoking. Thank you for sharing!

Sincerely,
Regina

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-09-09 02:15 PM

can we see the end from the beginning
or the beginning from the end???

good question. . . great job. . .

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