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Daddy's Girl
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Daddy's Girl |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida 
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Daddy's Girl is all grown up She's not little anymore She outgrew the stage of being immature Daddy's little girl Is still a kid at heart He hesitantly cut the strings So her life could start Daddy's little girl Is gauranteed to make mistakes He does his best to protect her When she suffers heart break He said, Honey let me tell you It's a cold, cruel world I believe you'll reach the stars Because your daddy's little girl Daddy's warm heart Could never tell lies We see eachother's beauty With our matching green eyes I said, Daddy, I'll try To always keep you proud Through baby blue skies Or dark gray clouds If ninety million dads gathered outside Only you would stand out in the large crowd |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
Having three daughters I know how hard the strings are to cut....I am still sawing on a few. Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Yeah, I am 19 years old, and he is still keeping a strong clutch on me!! He interrogates all my boyfriends..That's a dad's job though : ) |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Dad's and daughters have very special bonds, and you've portrayed that beautifully, RP... BTW - We have lots of now Passionate Scrollers among us... Lots of us ...  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
RosePetal - a most touching writing, from Daddy's little girl... BC |
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Topheth Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 297Texas |
Two young, young daughters of my own and recently separated from their mother - Touching. [This message has been edited by Topheth (edited 09-08-2001).] |
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oh2beme Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 215NV USA |
Rose very nicely done. Starting young too. I had the same relationship with my "Daddy" Thanks for bringing back the memories...  |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Nan: Thank you, Im glad you enjoyed my poem! I hope you will continue reading and enjoying my poetry Bill charles: Thanks for your kind words sir, how is it in melbourne, I am moving there soon! Topheth: Daughters are quite the handful when they reach there teens, Good Luck with them, I know you will do just fine. Sorry to hear about your separation from the mom. Keep your head up, you will love again! Thanks for posting a reply. Don't be a stranger! Oh2beme: Hey-Thanks a lot! So, your a daddy's girl like me hehe..Aww don't leave mom out : ) <3 RosePetal |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is so sweet and beautiul, sweet friend, you will always be daddys little girl and deep in your heart the child you were will always laugh and smile just as you have become the beautiful young woman I love so much! (kiss on lips) I love you so much, sweet Joanna! You have such a beautiful heart, my love, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
your comments always make me smile |
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