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MARK V SHELDON
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In a corporeal internship...

0 posted 2001-09-08 11:35 AM


Moonlight
Draws shadows

Inanimate objects
Break loose

Self-assured

They gather

Staging coups
With
Black lights
Glow


(Copyright 2001 by: MARK V SHELDON)


"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS


© Copyright 2001 Mark V Sheldon - All Rights Reserved
RosePetal
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1 posted 2001-09-08 11:48 AM


very interesting Mark! about my poem you just replied to..Theres not much to say about the guy, he is insecure and wants me around constantly, all day, every free minute I have.
Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
2 posted 2001-09-08 11:52 AM


I don't think I'd recite this in a graveyard ... just a feeling it gave me

MyEnchanted_Melody
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
3 posted 2001-09-08 02:05 PM




This time I feel a bit shivery ...
Quiet an atmosphere you have created here....I ditto Rex's comment...

Thank you
********************

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2001-09-08 02:11 PM


Gave me goosebumps in 85 degree weather!  Yet...another good one Mark!  

~Time has cast a spell on you
  so you won't ever forget me~

MARK V SHELDON
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In a corporeal internship...
5 posted 2001-09-08 05:06 PM


RosePetal, thanks for the comment.  It sounds to me like maybe his feelings toward you are..."stronger"...than yours towards him...?  In that case, as ALWAYS, Honesty is the best policy.

Rex -- at least not at midnight, on Halloween, or on Friday the 13th...

My Melody:    ;->

Nancy:  

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS


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