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Portrait Of Emotions (summer's soon gone)
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Portrait Of Emotions (summer's soon gone) |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida 
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Portrait Of Emotions ~*~ Alas, my love is a portrait of emotions set to the music of imagination will it vanish with the summer rose? I'll live each season as it passes surrounded by a vast ocean of hope embroidered by the poetry of dreams which must be entered I do not carry the winds of all knowing in my hands for the sun is set, summer's soon gone still, I'll breathe the fresh air in the kaleidoscope of change and dream on ~*~ BloomingRose |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Summer lives in our hearts....were hope resides.... this is very nice! |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
in the kaleidoscope of change and dream on" Wonderful sentiments!  Love the optimistic attitude.Great write, ~Krista  "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. And all you can do is to go where they can find you." ~Winnie the Pooh [This message has been edited by SmittenKitten (edited 08-31-2001).] |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Thank you much! Deb |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
You just painted a year round Blooming Rose. One whose petals so soft yet withstanding all winds of change. Sincerely, Regina |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Im playing catch up tonite...havent been able to keep up of late.... this is lovely Deb... the imagery and the poetic phrasing as well as the vocab and flow... well done poetess of the Rose jm A man who asks a woman to lie for him, is a man who will lie to that woman. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BloomingRose~ And I'm glad JanetMarie's playing catch up ! This is a beautiful piece of writing. You are so talented in presenting your thoughts so delicately~ Thank you for sharing~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Regina, Marge, & Janet~ Thank you so much for reading. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Deb- This is a gorgeous write. I really enjoyed the lovely thoughts you've penned here. Hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
for the sun is set, summer's soon gone still, I'll breathe the fresh air in the kaleidoscope of change and dream on *sigh*.....beautiful....fills me with melancholy |
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