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RSEvans
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0 posted 2001-09-08 12:34 PM


Tiny drops of sadness
  Pour from out my heart
Eroding sands of gladness
  Rivers form and part.
I miss you like the air
  I breathe every day
And sometimes I swear
  It just can't be that way.
When we are apart, my love
  I'm filled with such dispair
As though the heavens up above
  Did not contain the air.
So when you see my tear-stained cheeks
  And taste my salty tears
You'll know that minutes seem like weeks
  When I'm full of fears.
Fears of losing you, fears of pain
  These fears when I'm alone
That I will n'er see you again
  Never be truly home.
My heart cries tears in oceans
  But they'll never reach the sea
For they are just my emotions
  Getting the best of me.

Knowlege tempered by wisdom...Wisdom tamed by youth.


© Copyright 2001 Rob Evans - All Rights Reserved
snowpants
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since 2000-09-16
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1 posted 2001-09-08 12:42 PM


This is absolutely beautiful, RSEvans...you've quite a way of expressing your emotions...excellent write!

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tried to write a letter
to tell you how I feel,
but all I kept on writing
was slipping on the tears from the day...

Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
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2 posted 2001-09-08 12:45 PM


This speaks volumes of Love, very nice poem.
RosePetal
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3 posted 2001-09-08 01:04 AM


Beautiful, just like every other poem of
yours that I have read so far!

<3 RosePetal

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia
4 posted 2001-09-08 01:11 AM


So heartfelt RS !!!
I can relate to times like that
I often do sit by the ocean
pouring out my emotion
Hope

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