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To Dare All---for Tom with all my love
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To Dare All---for Tom with all my love |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
With trembling fingers and soft gentle sighs, we touch and it all begins. We learn with each kiss How far love can go, how high Til we reach heaven. In each others arms Not falling, but flying free A seed cast adrift. To dance in the rain To soar on the wings of love To find the path home. We dream together Of love that has yet to be Because we dare all. I love you |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
CAN I GET AN OOOOOOOOO YUH!! |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Don't you just love beginnings? You've written it perfectly. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ To take the dare can be so breathtakingly rewarding~ Wonderfully written~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Paula...James |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Great read Paula.this is so good. I wish you both all the happiness in the world. alan |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Paula !! ~Time has cast a spell on you |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
We learn with each kiss How far love can go, how high Til we reach heaven. I like this part very much! you go girl! <3 RosePetal |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wow! What a beautiful magic love poem! Keep up the good work! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
All smiles for the two of you!  |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Beautiful! |
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The Lonely Stranger Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 361Upstate, NY, USA |
Whole piece - Bravo ! This stanza : "To dance in the rain To soar on the wings of love To find the path home." Left me breathless. Simple yet joyously strong. No one ever listened themselves into trouble. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Wow! Excellent work here Paula! "Let me pierce the realm of glamour |
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