Open Poetry #15 |
Our Gift |
RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
We amble lone in lives of some success where whispered doubting moments we're annoyed, the strong alone reluctantly confess our imperfection, in our heart's a void. Psychobabel's modern pleonasm defines devotion as co-dependant, unfullfilled in Love, life's just a chasm well call me lame I'll sing not Love's lament. Pray let me seek communion through our eyes and breathe in passion's breath, I don't fear it, complete, united beings verify power of two hearts are this world's spirits. In mix and meld's diversity's our strength where one may lack the other fortifies and blessed are they who know such bliss at length, for never more will this life gratify. As poetry's blend is passion, order, so Love is a higher order's passion let nothing on this earth come before her nor hoard it's beauty, it's gift's not rationed. [This message has been edited by RSWells (edited 09-08-2001).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well done, Sir, very well done indeed...no critique required.... |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'In mix and meld's diversity's our strength where one may lack the other fortifies and blessed are they who know such bliss at length, for never more will this life gratify.' Brilliant lines, Richard...very VERY well written...great write! sp tried to write a letter |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
woopsie...forgot the library thang... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
We amble lone in lives of some success where whispered doubting moments we're annoyed, the strong alone reluctantly confess our imperfection, in our heart's a void. Psychobabel's modern pleonasm defines devotion as co-dependant, unfullfilled in Love, life's just a chasm well call me lame I'll sing not Love's lament. ============================= I do so enjoy your rhymes of divine cadence kissed and pure poetry absolutely beautiful Richard Well I looked to the sky for my anthem |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now that was a wonderful, well written piece Richard, and as usual your rhyme and cadence were of perfection. Well done! *~If you can't say anything nice about someone, don't say anything at all*~ |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
I can only think It will come back to you ten fold! To me, the trying is bliss! This is perfect! Sincerely, Regina It's all in the mind |
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Apachecat906 Member
since 2001-09-04
Posts 217Michigan, USA |
I think this is beautiful, but Im not sure since it was too far over my head to get a good look. Anyway, it sounded pretty...I'll be thinking about this for a while. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
superbly done. . . indeed, your gift is ours as well. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
so many gifts you have brought to Passion's table to share, and this one is as wonderful as all the rest!! The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... |
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