Open Poetry #15 |
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What's The Difference? |
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Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart ![]() |
What’s the Difference? she stands golden in sunlight a tilt of head, she hears me I talk to her of many plans her face says, please feed me she listens quietly to words and then mine balm her soul sometimes, I tell her dreams she motions “reach all goals” receiving hugs and kisses but wary still she be of all who cross her threshold or stands beneath her trees now to pack and plan, must I a trip soon shall I take she wonders at how man so simple, desperate makes each and every modest move for things that must be done as for every rib, a groove for every Eve, a Sun ~*~ here, there is a parallel two lives that take and breathe one who still expects one who has long grieved one who is an animal anticipates give and take one who is the human needing day’s slice of cake ~*~ each are golden in their time not fearing great disaster as either one give all, and more, for each revere a Master |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sunshine--I nod my head to this..and give you a hugs...for the trip. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
a beautiful piece of work....lovely heartfelt writing ...... i send you peace, love, and all my prayers from my heart youaresuchabeautifulperson........ |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautifully expressed, Karilea! Please know that my prayers go with you. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
I like the way this is written but it seems to pull me in more than one direction ... I'll be back to read it again ![]() |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I don't think there is much difference - do you? Animal or human, I believe, just want acceptance and a little love. Well done. Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sunshine, this is so touching. my hugs and love go with you. ![]() |
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