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Open Poetry #15

Pleasures On The Bay

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2001-09-07 08:59 AM

Pleasures On The Bay

In following footprints
To pleasures all day
Know where to meet
Walk along by the bay

Ready to be indulged
In pleasures and fun
Playing in the ocean
Then bathe in the sun

In my doing whatever
A pleasure it is to be
Sharing the fun time
Enjoyment by the sea

At last sharing smiles
Pleasures are spread
Each fulfilling desires
Until sunset glows red

Here at the days end
In pleasures of today
Walking hand in hand
As moon lights the bay

Hope © 2001

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2001-09-07 09:16 AM

HopeS,
A delightful write of Hope.

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

2 posted 2001-09-07 11:07 AM

Thanks for your sweet , kind reply Seymour
yes where there is life, there is hope
Hope

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

3 posted 2001-09-08 12:07 PM

You are such a romantic guy..I want to walk hand in hand with you as the sun sets!!
You get my HopeS up hehe.

<3 RosePetal

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

4 posted 2001-09-08 12:12 PM

Thanks Rose Petal but I am a female !!!
Hope

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

5 posted 2001-09-08 12:19 PM

Oh my gosh, I feel like an idiot,
my deepest apologies! Forgive me

<3 RosePetal

The Rusty Knight
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 414
Texas

6 posted 2001-09-08 01:00 PM

I forgot what I was going to say after reading the post. *S* Oh yes

I liked the poem....for some reason poets like to write with the sea or a beach in the background, but it never gets tiring....I guess snow paints a lovely picture, but when we speak of love we want to feel the warmth.

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

7 posted 2001-09-08 01:03 PM

Thanks Rusty Knight
Snow can be a pretty sight
If someone is sharing
and holding you tight
Hope
P.S its just that I have nice beautiful
beaches close by

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