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Open Poetry #15

A Small Glimpse

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

0 posted 2001-09-07 07:45 PM

Touching he is
And doesn't know who I am
Open yourself up to it
No holding back
Honesty opens the door
Extravagent thoughts
Swinging as a pendulum
You feel and know
Full circle for you alone
A key entrapped
Sunken long before
Am I dreaming
I sense too much
These tools I own
Entrenched inside of here
Let me out

The Rusty Knight
Member

since 2001-08-29

Posts 414
Texas

1 posted 2001-09-07 08:11 PM

Honesty opens the door
Extravagent thoughts
Swinging as a pendulum

I like the imagery used here. It is interesting using extravagent with thoughts...it worked well

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

2 posted 2001-09-08 12:33 PM

"Open yourself up to it
No holding back
Honesty opens the door"

These lines seemed to jump out at me. Good to read you again, take care!

"Let me pierce the realm of glamour
So I know just what I am." ~ Van Morrison

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-09-08 11:36 AM

"honesty opens the door. . . "

indeed it does my friend. . . wonderfully done. . .

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