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SunShine913
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0 posted 2001-09-07 04:13 PM



Do I really love you?
   Look into my eyes.
The shine you see
   is the light
of my soul.

Notice my smile.
   How spontaneous and true!
My face glows in your presence
   my lips caress your name.

Can you not hear
   the hum of my body
responding to your nearness?
   My heart keeps time.

Touch me....I tremble
   Hold me...I sigh
Kiss me...I melt
   Ask me....

.......I love you!

                    !~Andrea~!
*You only live once, so live it to the
fullest*
*what is love?*
*If you ever need anyone to talk to feel free to l

© Copyright 2001 Andrea L. Figueroa - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2001-09-07 04:22 PM


"my lips caress your name."  This is a beautiful write.  Simply lovely. Enjoyed immensely.  Thanks for sharing.

~Time has cast a spell on you
  so you won't ever forget me~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2001-09-07 06:02 PM


Touch me...I tremble.
Hold me....I sigh.
Kiss me....I melt.
Like these lines...I love it when they tremble...James

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