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NightShadow
Member

since 2001-09-04

Posts 127
New Jersey

0 posted 2001-09-07 01:56 PM

Tears

Tears come fast
Blur my vision
Make me tremble
Stumble, fall
Tears so thick
You can't stop crying
More, more, never ending
The tear streaks
Cover my face
They don't wipe away
Tears come fast
Unstopping all the day

"Its a fearful thing to love what death can touch" -BlakRose

[This message has been edited by NightShadow (edited 09-07-2001).]

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

1 posted 2001-09-07 02:30 PM

*Wiping your tears* Nice work! Can't wait to see more from you.

<3 RosePetal

NightShadow
Member

since 2001-09-04

Posts 127
New Jersey

2 posted 2001-09-07 02:39 PM

Thanks!

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

3 posted 2001-09-07 03:18 PM

sometimes its better to release tears when your sad. Heartfelt penned.

Charisma

RSEvans
Senior Member

since 1999-10-23

Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA

4 posted 2001-09-07 04:21 PM

When tears fall like raindrops they leave stains on our souls. Don't cry, my rose...smile and think of me.

DreamRomancer
Junior Member

since 2001-09-18

Posts 46
Ohio, United States

5 posted 2001-09-24 10:50 AM

The tears shall pass
A rainbow shall form
Happiness shall shine
Love shall grow
Memories shall make
of the tears that fall

Very good pen!!!!
Your works touch my soul and caress my heart
Keep up the good work

With my pen I shall create,
With my mind I shall explore,
With my strength I shall endure,
With my poetry I shall have legacy.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2001-09-24 07:50 PM

Ahh, I can feel your heartache. Hope all is well now.

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

7 posted 2001-09-24 09:55 PM

This is a very good poem. I like it.

NightShadow
Member

since 2001-09-04

Posts 127
New Jersey

8 posted 2001-09-25 08:03 AM

Thanks.. I don't know if it will ever go away.. but thanks.. *smiles*

A Life without Love, is no life at all...

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2004-06-01 04:00 AM

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