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Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

0 posted 2001-09-07 09:52 AM

I walked out to clouds
grey scuddings across dull pewter
sunrise was hidden

Sliding into drivers seat
I prepared for coming day
knowing the duties required
would also be leaden

Headlights dim light gloamings
and pathways paved lead on

I walked out to clouds
and my thoughts scurried in winds
that chased sheets of rain
drenching skin too tender
for the biting sting of change

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-09-07 10:05 AM

wow Ron.....

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

2 posted 2001-09-07 10:07 AM

it is so pleasant to take a break in the day's activity and come out drenched by good poetry....

well done Sir!

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2001-09-07 10:07 AM

wow? ( smiling) I know it is hard to believe anyone can consistantly write as badly as I do....

How's SEA these days?

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2001-09-07 10:11 AM

spiffy.....

your poetry is awesome, quit knocking it....

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

5 posted 2001-09-07 10:56 AM

A deluge of Kudos to you...

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

6 posted 2001-09-07 12:40 PM

Hey, nothing bad here, wonderful write...
Always enjoy your work.
Sandra

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

7 posted 2001-09-07 01:24 PM

Ron.... this is great!
~Connie~
Sometimes I hate change LOL but no matter how hard I fight it.... There it is

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

8 posted 2001-09-07 02:48 PM

I liked the grey imagery supporting the concept of change and as always, the way in which your choice of title is as important as the rest of the poem. Consistently great work, Ron -- I hope you're just kidding with your downplaying...

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS

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