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MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

0 posted 2001-09-06 07:13 PM

~*~ Will I ever know you? ~*~

Lost in the heart of you
Lost in words you say
Lost in rhymes
You bring my way

But will I ever know you?

Will I ever trace
That who stands
Beyond all things
Said
All words
Sent to my land

Will I ever know?
The lines
In your hands
That should tell
So much about you
Though
Mere predictions
They could be
For what lines
Could ever
Solve the mystery

Will I ever know?
The shores
The sea
The moon
That bewitched me so

Will I ever know?
The swords
The knight
In battles lost
Before they ever start
For they
Always raged
Within my heart

Will I ever read?
The utterances
Between the lines
You ceremoniously
Bequeath
In halls
Though empty
Yet
Echo of the music
Of the heart
You try hard to reach

Will I ever see?
The reflection
Of me
In your eyes
Eternally

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Thank you

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-09-06 07:16 PM

ok, I have a favorite from you

wow wow wow!!! I love this. Definately one I will keep!

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

2 posted 2001-09-06 07:34 PM

Read my words and you will know a part of me, for no one will ever truly know all of me... ;->

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-09-06 09:26 PM

perhaps you already do my friend. . .

excellently done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

4 posted 2001-09-06 10:22 PM

beautiful...I think I'm going to keep this one ...great read
alan

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

5 posted 2001-09-07 12:44 PM

Your poetry gets better every time

Well written, I've been there before...

"Will I ever see?
the reflection
of me
in your eyes
eternally"

perfectly said!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

6 posted 2001-09-07 08:21 AM

very nice... this one I think is my favorite of what I have seen from you.... very well done...

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

7 posted 2001-09-07 09:28 AM

~Sea~

I'm thrilled that you loved it.

Thank you dear

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~Mark~

No one will ever know all of you......as much as no one will ever know all that there is or not in him...

And I'm reading .....reading...my friend..

Thank you
--------------------------
~Sven~
Do I??
Then I have already had the honor dear friend......

Thank you
-------------------------

~Alan~
I'm glad you liked it....

Thank you
-------------------------

~Melissa~

Thank you for the sweet words....
I am hoping that my poetry indeed gets better

----------------------

~Ron~

I'm really glad that now you have a favourite of my poems.....

Thank you dearly...

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[This message has been edited by MyEnchanted_Melody (edited 09-07-2001).]

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

8 posted 2001-09-07 09:36 AM

Yes, so many questions and longings. Very beautifully done.
Sandra

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

9 posted 2001-09-07 03:14 PM

~Sandra~

Thank you as always dearest.....

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