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Open Poetry #15

Which Tears

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2001-09-07 05:52 AM

There is pain,
Of one sort or another,
Spirit and
Emotion,
An inner cry and shudder.
There’s breaking
And bleeding,
Body’s abuse wrenching cry,
The longing
For ending,
And yet the fearing to die.
Suffer on,
Shed the tears and carry on.

You remain,
For today and another,
Spiritless
And hopeless,
You now stumble and mutter,
Existing
And staying,
Finally tears have run dry,
From choice made
Bruises fade,
Once more she will give a try.
Carry on,
Shed the cheers and suffer on.

Gloom

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-09-07 08:17 AM

ah...we do go on..and we do struggle...

nicely said Gloom... nicely said...

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

2 posted 2001-09-08 11:01 AM

Good Write. I hope to see more from you soon

<3 RosePetal

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

3 posted 2001-09-08 11:14 AM

Very powerfull

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2001-09-08 11:28 AM

Oh, the sadness of it all....makes one want to jump into the poem and rescue this poor soul. Very good indeed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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