Open Poetry #15 |
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Come To My Island |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Would you go with me To my private Island I have just for you and me We will walk in the moonlight Wish upon the starlight Hoping this night will never end We will play in the sun Acting like kids having fun Holding hands and talking While the clouds float above We will make love In the gentle surf Everyday with you would be fine We would have sunshine Even on cloudy days Our love will flow free As if carried on the breeze For this island is just for you and me alan |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
It sounds beautiful to me! ![]() ![]() Don't gain my affections then cover my eyes. Don't sweep me off my feet then fail to catch me before I hit the floor. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WHAT TIME IS THE NEXT FLIGHT ??! Oooh, I do love this picture! ~Time has cast a spell on you |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
temptress..thank you..i am glad that you liked it and got a smile. alan |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Alan, this sounds so romantic. Lovely idea. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Good....I could use some company...hehe thanks Dee |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Alan: Just beautiful!!!! ~Connie~ |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Now this sounds like a perfect place. It hums a peaceful sweet serenity of love. I'm with Enchantress. When's the next flight??? If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Thank you Connie Tracey..I am glad you like it. if you hurry it leaves tonite... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
He's ignoring me Tracey...don't leave me here!! Besides you're leaving for England and I get your seat!! ![]() ~Time has cast a spell on you |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
now Enchantress...how could i ignore some one as sweet as you. |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
We all have pictures in our head what our paradise would be...You painted yours well. In fact if I win the lottery I will look for one just like it. sunshine...native girls....palm trees.....lady poets.....ocean breeze....Dallas Cheerleaders....sorry to get carried away on your island. Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
hey...no problem Rusty..just so you have enough for two..thanks for the reply...the thoughts of the Dallas cheerleaders was nice. |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Alan, your magic island is full of all of us, now you may have to find a new one ![]() This was so inviting, I really would wish for exactly this.. Sandra |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Enchantress, I'd skip the trip to England for a trip to that island (but only if there's a pub there!!! ![]() If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Sandra...you are more than welcome to spend time on my island. Tracey...you can find anything on my island except tears |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Hey Alan what can I say I am off booking my flight right away Hope |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
sounds good to me..so I'm on my way Charisma |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Hope...you know there is always room for you. Charisma....come on little lady the partys just starting |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I'd go |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Paula...you are more than welcome on my island anytime... |
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RosePetal![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Damn, it sounds perfect Alan. I'm coming with the rest of the girls!! <3 RosePetal I'll be there by early evening, dont start without me hehe [This message has been edited by RosePetal (edited 09-08-2001).] |
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