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Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

0 posted 2001-09-07 12:14 PM

Mirror, mirror on the wall
Do you see
What I see
When it is she
In front of thee

Oh…. Mirror on the wall
Let her see
What I see
When it is she
In front of thee

Let her see
Herself thru
The eyes of me
The one that loves her so

Let her see
What she does to me
By just being around me
For she is everything to me

Let her see
How exquisite she is to me
Let her see
Herself thru those
Exotic eyes just what I see

From her
Beautiful hair
That I love to run
My fingers thru
To her luscious face
That to me is heavenly

Mirror, mirror
Let her see
That to me
She is far prettier
Than a sunset

alan aka Icyheart

The Rusty Knight
Member

since 2001-08-29

Posts 414
Texas

1 posted 2001-09-07 12:58 PM

With words such as these she should easily see.

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

2 posted 2001-09-07 02:04 PM

I like this a lot..It makes me think of my
boyfriend because he sometimes asks me what I see in him. I try my best to express
it to him but if only he could see himself through my eyes. Excellent Poem!!

<3 RosePetal

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2001-09-07 02:16 PM

Lovely....Enjoyed a lot!

~Time has cast a spell on you
so you won't ever forget me~

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2001-09-07 03:20 PM

Really nice Alan. Wish you would stand beside me when I look in the mirror!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

5 posted 2001-09-07 03:27 PM

very nice!

Charisma

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

6 posted 2001-09-07 04:18 PM

Alan,
This is beautiful.... keep looking at her
with your eyes shining like that and maybe soon she will see herself in them....funny how that can work...
~Connie~

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

7 posted 2001-09-07 06:06 PM

Your muse's come back Allan?

Lovely write it is.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

8 posted 2001-09-07 06:45 PM

Thank you everyone. Your kind comments mean alot.

Titia.....thank you. As for the muse, the only one I have other than my imagination is life. Who knows I might write one about my new friend in the Netherland. Take care little lady.
alan

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

9 posted 2001-09-08 01:12 PM

The eyes of love see so much. Very beautiful love poem.
Sandra

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

10 posted 2001-09-08 01:14 PM

Alan

this is beautiful

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

11 posted 2001-09-30 07:12 PM

EXCELLENT POEM!!!

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