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NightShadow
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0 posted 2001-09-06 04:23 PM


The Computer

The light comes on
The programs appear
The modem rings
And brings me to cheer

Hoping you are there
I sit on the edge of my seat
Waiting for things to happen

One day we'll be together
The computer will separate
Us no more
As we belong as one

"Its a fearful thing to love what death can touch" -BlakRose

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Charisma
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1 posted 2001-09-06 06:28 PM


enjoyed the read, hope that the day breaks on soon that the computer can't seperate you two.

Charisma

RSEvans
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2 posted 2001-09-06 07:11 PM


As do I...
The Rusty Knight
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3 posted 2001-09-06 08:32 PM


Do you ever find yourself grinning at the computer screen...I think there is some kind of microwave it gives off that turn the corners of my mouth up...the waves got stronger reading this

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

DawnG
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4 posted 2001-09-06 09:43 PM


Nightshadow,

These words ring true with me again as they have so many times in the past. If only we could meet our loved ones in person as easily as we can be together online. But believe you me, I wouldn't give up my online friends for anything.

                            Dawn

NightShadow
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5 posted 2001-09-06 10:12 PM


Charisma and RSEvans: I really wish it could, and Im hoping maybe one day....

Rusty Knight: I always smile when talking to a certain someone.... as Im smiling right now.. Thanks for the reply..

DawnG  Thank you again! And like you, I would never give my online friends up for anything in the world!  

"Its a fearful thing to love what death can touch" -BlakRose

Alan
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6 posted 2001-09-06 10:39 PM


This is good. I have several friends on here that I would love to meet. I wish you the best.
alan

DreamRomancer
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7 posted 2001-09-26 07:36 PM


My dear, I know the feeling well.  There was a girl that I used to date that gave me the same feeling.  I couldn't wait to exchange the computer screen for the physical and emotional love that only face-to-face can produce!  Maybe some day......

With my pen I shall create,
With my mind I shall explore,
With my strength I shall endure,
With my poetry I shall have legacy.

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