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Hollowman
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0 posted 2001-09-05 05:52 PM



Stranger judge me so
for the clothes I do wear
not lables of design
no vidal sasoon hair

I buy the cheapest food
as nutrition is just a word
vitamins are a fable
health? thats obsurd!

My heart is made of fats
my bacon is not trimmed
my belt strains at the hip
I scratch my double chins

Shudder as I walk
a corney dog my best friend
a simple delight of technology
even with its crunchy end

So down the health store
you go, your lables fail to impress
to me I see a human
regardless how they dress....

Richy


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with you
1 posted 2001-09-05 07:10 PM


pretty much,   I think health is important though, not the labels. I don't care what you wear, as long as you are a good person. That is what matters most  

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2001-09-05 07:29 PM


society and living around it is my passion, I'm a people watcher. Images are everywhere. And it's sad...and also kinda funny in a way, if you're used to it like I am.
Tracey
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where insanity meets breeding
3 posted 2001-09-05 10:36 PM


Nice humour, but also speaks very very true words. Nicely done

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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