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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Sometimes in the early evening sitting chin resting on fingers elbows resting on knees on the top porch step I remember you walking through the gate and sometimes I have to admit that even then I knew it was only a matter of time |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
one day someone is gonna walk through that gate and stay |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Like this...James |
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rascalx Senior Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 590Florence, SC, USA |
quaint... sweet...thoughtful... but powerful in it's simplicity..especially the last line.  Well done! - Jeff |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
How nicely written Duncan. You speak volumes in so few sentences. SO well done. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
This speaks to me... loved it! *smiles* ~Tier |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Your insight is showing...strange how we know, and still hope otherwise... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
do like this style...and the imagery created with just a few words... Good stuff....and I have become a fan... |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
That nagging doubt, that fear. I wonder does it interfere? Good write with few words. |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
simply lovely..... May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat... |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
hmm.."only a matter of time"... to know that, and still allow yourself to love..you have given yourself a moment of life.. great write DUNCAN.. hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
We never have to be told we always really know Beautiful!!! ~Connie~ |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Time our faithful companion/enemy. This reminds me of fishing calmly, quietly, waiting to catch that fish. Love is like that sometimes and as complicated. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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poetsguild Member
since 2001-08-12
Posts 85Florida |
awareness of the transitory nature of things can give us cause to mourn or make us more thankful for the time we have it's a difficult place to be either way nice work, Duncan |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
funny how you have a way of reaching into my heart......and touching so softly. This is wonderful. "Deputy Moderator ~ Open Forum" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Duncan...I enjoy this style of writing so much! I am speechless. Loved it! ~Time has cast a spell on you |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Duncan~ Nostalgically picturesque~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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