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Hollowman
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0 posted 2001-09-05 05:24 PM


My sea of tranquility
Oh how you stare down at me
from up above this world so blue
I long to be floating on you

I'll never touch your waters
I'll never tread your sands
for you are a million miles
far above this land

I have never seen your dark side
I always see the bright
your spherical silvery shape
looms silently in the night

I wonder if Armstrong touched
the surface of your face
your crowning halo glows
far out into space

One day it may be so grand
to kiss your sand so grey
but moon, dont forget
its a million miles away...


Richy

xxxx


[This message has been edited by Hollowman (edited 09-06-2001).]

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even that which is a million miles away, can still be touched........


Oh I liked this very much!  

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2 posted 2001-09-06 03:27 PM


HollowMan~

Oh, how I enjoyed this piece~

'I have never seen your dark side
I always see the bright
your spherical silvery shape
looms silently in the night

I wonder if Armstrong touched
the surface of your face
your crowing halo glows
far out into space'


Nicely done~
~*Marge*~

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