I’ve left no feelings here unfaked (You sure have a way with venom)

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Open Poetry #15

I’ve left no feelings here unfaked (You sure have a way with venom)

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since 2001-06-20

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0 posted 2001-09-05 04:10 PM

I’ve left no feelings here unfaked
I only move with spider strings
And every step I plan to take
Surely you would pull my wings

My thorax is your punish point
Your needle has a way with words
I'd scream them from my open lungs
If only they would go unheard

I’ll live my life without a plan
Because at first you must approve
I’m trapped within your sticky tongue
To hang here limp from your next move

Cut me from you’re web of death
I’m blinded, deafened, rendered dumb
You sure have a way with venom
I had your love, my world is numb

[This message has been edited by Front Page (edited 09-05-2001).]

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

1 posted 2001-09-05 04:26 PM

Wow! Very powerful words, here! Enjoyed reading!

~Tier

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

2 posted 2001-09-05 11:22 PM

*sigh* This certainly is powerful writing,and the ending packs it all in. I really liked this one.

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

3 posted 2001-09-06 12:02 PM

I can only echo the others. Powerful, very, very powerful.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

cruz
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since 2000-07-18

Posts 282
Dallas,Texas USA

4 posted 2001-09-06 09:16 PM

what infinite sadness expressed quite deeplee. so, whos tha spider and... is your world numb 'cause you no longer have love? very interesting

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