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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Promises Holding onto shredded past Aching fingers, sharpened mind Sorrow thoughts what doesn't last Only shadows does one find. Cycling wheels, the season's gone Of Summer's wants, Falls rushing in Touch not the soul, to come undone That warmth of hands, withholding sin. Comes around, that face in dark Silhouetted, shadows walk Once-met timing, caught off-guard Words in print becomes shared talk. Promises suspend in holding Leafing out, treasure's unfolding. ~smiling~ *Edie* for a day "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
A poem whose each re-read discloses a little bit more... it set my cycles spinning, encouraging thought, which is always a good thing, in my book. Nicely penned, Wynter. -MVS "It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself." |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
nakdthoughts - how this ever went so far down the list with only one reply is beyond me... Let's try it again, my dear one... BC |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
MARK Well, to set your cycles spinning I must have had a good thought or two in here. Thank you *s Bill you know how it is..some get read more often then others and some get responded to more..besides it's all in the timing and I have never been good at that either *s...always great to have you around. hugssssssssssss Maureen "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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