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Gwendrina
Junior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 33

0 posted 2001-09-04 11:57 PM

For a moment
you can see her—
The first spirit of evening.

Near the edge of the road
she stands
full-skirted in twilight
and chasing  wind from her hair.
Her  fingertips are light
as willow leaves brushing
time off the water’s scalp.

Quietly she bends;
her fabric creased
with the rhythm  of crickets,
her soft touch felt
by  the closing  eyelids
of each plant.

Petals fold up
drawing in
the coolness of her breath.
and  a spoken wish
to be loved
by  the man who wrote her poems.

His eyes watch,
ripen tenderly
in the blue mood
of plums and late summer.

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

1 posted 2001-09-04 11:59 PM

Gwendrina~

You painted some marvelous images here, what a great way with words you have!

Excellent work here with a perfect picture~

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

2 posted 2001-09-05 12:03 PM

ahhhhhhhh
the lucid languid
sweetness
flower born
by buds

the morn'
of visions
of in love

captured quick
on eyelids

ahhhhhhhh
the tender
write
ripened
with hello

no vanish to
the fruits
of bliss

you know

debussy's reverie
plays in my heart....
your verse, in tune,
completed
awes
apart

ahhhhhhhh
your lines of poetry
dart hope inside my soul!

filled with dawned
quiescence,
morning told!!

[This message has been edited by doreen peri (edited 09-05-2001).]

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2001-09-05 08:01 AM

GwenDrina~
Elegantly portrayed~
Such a pleasure to enjoy each piece of the imagery~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Gwendrina
Junior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 33

4 posted 2001-09-05 03:40 PM

Hi Melissa,Doreen and Marge,

thank you all so very much for your kind words and gracius replies. I really appreciate all the wonderful feedback.

Doreen,
What a beautiful verse you have created in response to this poem. I really enjoyed reading your lyrical thoughts. Thank you for
composing it.

Wendy

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-09-05 07:19 PM

ahhh. . . this is just the reverie that I needed. . .

wonderfully done Gwendrina. . .

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