Open Poetry #15 |
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Reverie |
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Gwendrina Junior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 33 |
![]() For a moment you can see her— The first spirit of evening. Near the edge of the road she stands full-skirted in twilight and chasing wind from her hair. Her fingertips are light as willow leaves brushing time off the water’s scalp. Quietly she bends; her fabric creased with the rhythm of crickets, her soft touch felt by the closing eyelids of each plant. Petals fold up drawing in the coolness of her breath. and a spoken wish to be loved by the man who wrote her poems. His eyes watch, ripen tenderly in the blue mood of plums and late summer. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Gwendrina~ You painted some marvelous images here, what a great way with words you have! ![]() Excellent work here with a perfect picture~ Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
ahhhhhhhh the lucid languid sweetness flower born by buds the morn' of visions of in love captured quick on eyelids ahhhhhhhh the tender write ripened with hello no vanish to the fruits of bliss you know debussy's reverie plays in my heart.... your verse, in tune, completed awes apart ahhhhhhhh your lines of poetry dart hope inside my soul! filled with dawned quiescence, morning told!! [This message has been edited by doreen peri (edited 09-05-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GwenDrina~ Elegantly portrayed~ Such a pleasure to enjoy each piece of the imagery~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Gwendrina Junior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 33 |
Hi Melissa,Doreen and Marge, thank you all so very much for your kind words and gracius replies. I really appreciate all the wonderful feedback. Doreen, What a beautiful verse you have created in response to this poem. I really enjoyed reading your lyrical thoughts. Thank you for composing it. Wendy |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ahhh. . . this is just the reverie that I needed. . . wonderfully done Gwendrina. . . ![]() ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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