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Mystic of Rainbows
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Mystic of Rainbows |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee 
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 Streaming ribbons Cascading light Neath mossy willows 'Tis where she hides Her shade of laurel Mountain wreaths Whisper in mystic Of Echo's reprieve Be thee not weary Be thee not sad Bring pure of heart To the looking glass Leave your voice softly Step cool in esteem The mystic of rainbows Appear in the stream Where there are voices Found in the mist Hush of the beauty E'er flowing bliss Bathe in the blankets fresh in the sift Magical fingers Will lift thee adrift Cry if thee will The tide, due course Through to the river Of empty remorse Find me in solace Surge in my breath The stones smooth Cold, not of my death I'll bring rays of light Through yonder lace Of yellow and orange That doth grace my face If ye will open Clear eyes and see The face of the Mystic That feeds to the sea |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my...oh my. I am totally speechless! This is a magnificent work of art! This one made my day!! Thank you so much for sharing. ~Time has cast a spell on you |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I have to echo Enchantress. Just wonderful. Uplifting. Love your work, Rgina. Sandra |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RWood~ You have penned perfection here. The imagery softly cascades~ Very, very pleasing~ The graphic is most appealing~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is a very cool poem... your succinct verses added to its mystic pleasures...as did the vocabulary. And of course the imagery is its lovely centerpiece. well done Regina...yet another style of poetry from you  jm A man who asks a woman to lie for him, is a man who will lie to that woman. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nice.. a change in ways for you from a style perspective..but still filled with the imagery I have come to appreciate from you.. mystical and yet... perhaps not so much so..if you look under a layer or two of potential meaning... Such a thing lies in all of us..does it not? |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
look closer. . . I think that I can see something else. . . it's there. . . look again. . . well done. . .  ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Regina, this flows beautifully. Well done again. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*wow*....me too are speechless, I agree with all above, this is magnificient penned. Charisma |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
I looked at this piece a long time trying to find my favorite line to put here in the comments. They all worked so well I could not pick just one. You have painted a clear picture of a place I would love to go to clear my eyes. Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. [This message has been edited by The Rusty Knight (edited 09-06-2001).] |
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