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Tiersdin
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0 posted 2001-09-04 05:04 PM




No
miraculous
changes
occured
since your
spring time
leaving


i am
still
in love
with you
suffering
heat of summer
grieving


Autumn
approaches
steadily
my heart
trips on
the fall


Soon the
cold shall
comfort me
then i shant
feel at all

any
miraculous
changes
occurring...




~Tier
9/01



© Copyright 2001 R.T. Webster-Mosby - All Rights Reserved
Lady In White
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1 posted 2001-09-04 05:09 PM



Tier...this was beautiful...

DawnG
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2 posted 2001-09-04 05:29 PM


I must agree this is beautiful. Both aesthetically and to the eyes.

                               Dawn

Sven
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3 posted 2001-09-04 06:28 PM


too many to count my friend. . . far too many. . .

wonderfully done. . .  

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Duncan
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4 posted 2001-09-05 01:07 AM


Soon the
cold shall
comfort me
then i shant
feel at all

Though I've never been a fan of winter, this year I am looking oddly forward to it, for much the same reason.  I really appreciated your poem.

cottage
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5 posted 2001-09-05 03:01 AM


wat an enchanting write, I've enjoyed this very much! thanks
bsquirrel
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6 posted 2002-10-02 11:26 PM


Awesome seasons!!!
Gorgeous writing!

passing shadows
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7 posted 2003-01-12 04:52 AM


very colorful write, i enjoyed this
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