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bad reception or a new intention?
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bad reception or a new intention? |
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staybellmined Junior Member
since 2001-07-29
Posts 21insanity, usa (killeen,tx) |
forgive me for being misunderstood it's a by-product of society and childhood like russian roullete with a coctail bar some times you can't tell what's too far it's times like those that I get this perception just don't get mad cause I've got bad reception it must be the blank spot in my mind the occupation of a life I'm still trying to find I love and need you but you keep pulling me down feeling trapped underwater and ready to drown love me or leave me but don't try to control I've spent my life wondering when I'd be whole I've been manipulated, used, abused and rejected spent my life alone, silent and infected never again will I play those games tired of being trapped by memories and names so please excuse the bad reception it's a by-product of a new intention |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Yes I can see how bad reception could be a by-product of a new intention. Lots of metaphorical reference here in this poem....a very enjoyable read! Welcome to Passions! |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Haven't we all suffered from that bad reception. Great, strong write. I had to read it twice. (By the way, I know your location, I believe we're neighbours  )If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Awesome! ~Tier |
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