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catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2001-09-03 10:36 PM

Tonight I try to find a way
to justify my life and day
it sometimes seems futility
to carry on so fruitlessly..

Yet carry on we have to do
theres nothing else to comfort you
Just words and dreams and maybe hope
the only things with which to cope..

Somewhere in time there is a plan
the meaning which will make it stand
If only answers will come soon
before the next lonely blue moon.

So now I go to bed to dream
and know that nothing else will seem
to be the life I want so bad
the love I've never really had...

The Rusty Knight
Member

since 2001-08-29

Posts 414
Texas

1 posted 2001-09-03 10:41 PM

I think poets feel emotions deeper than most people...I can only hope the lady in this poem finds here soulmate...very touching

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

[This message has been edited by The Rusty Knight (edited 09-05-2001).]

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

2 posted 2001-09-04 12:08 PM

cat,

Tonight you surely dream alone
as must we all, it is our home.
Tomorrow morn when light is shown
go we again this endless roam.

(Hoping, nevertheless, this goal be met)

Krawdad

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2001-09-04 12:25 PM

Somewhere in time there is a plan
the meaning which will make it stand
If only answers will come soon
before the next lonely blue moon.

So now I go to bed to dream
and know that nothing else will seem
to be the life I want so bad
the love I've never really had...
===================================

this is a bittersweet, sincere write wrapped in rhyme...
Sandra you have poetically encompassed the many emotions of a poet who writes to find release and fill the losses and voids with their hearts expressions.
I know all who read this relate to it.
Well done poetess Cat

jm

A man who asks a woman to lie for him, is a man who will lie to that woman.
A woman who lies for a man, is a woman who lies to herself.
(vise versa)

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

4 posted 2001-09-04 05:54 AM

I agree with JM, me too thinks that many people can relate on your words...I can...
excellent penned.

Charisma

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

5 posted 2001-09-04 07:12 AM

How wonderfully put Sandra. Hope you had sweet dreams last night

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

athena4
Senior Member

since 2000-12-10

Posts 622

6 posted 2001-09-04 11:55 AM

Sandra,
How beautifully spoken, and I know so many can relate. Our dreams bring us comfort, so never cease in dreaming. And never give up on the real life dreams either...KTDA....
Love, Elise

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

7 posted 2001-09-04 12:16 PM

Catalinamoon, you've such a way of expressing emotions, just beautiful sweet girl.

So now I go to bed to dream
and know that nothing else will seem
to be the life I want so bad
the love I've never really had

Be sure it will come to you dear, it's out there, I just know.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

8 posted 2001-09-05 07:05 AM

Dear Sandra, It's there in the nightweave of waking. Soon I hope for you. Beautiful verse!

Sincerely,
Regina

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2001-09-05 07:48 AM

CatalinaMoon~
The heart of a poet romances the night~
Very nicely done~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

10 posted 2001-09-05 10:58 AM

Ah, this says it all, and perfectly! Enjoyed this one a lot, lil sis!!

The road goes on forever, and the stories never end...

Janette

Member Elite

since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

11 posted 2001-09-05 07:12 PM

Sandra...this one is lovely and very heartfelt...I love it.
Janette

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

12 posted 2001-09-05 08:35 PM

enjoy

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

13 posted 2001-09-05 11:23 PM

Wistful and contemplative with some points to consider... Somewhere between the two lies the bridge -- now it's simply a matter of discovering it. Beautifully written.

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS

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