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Open Poetry #15

A Dream So Real

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-09-03 09:11 PM

A candlelit room
With a beautiful view
Nobody but us here
Just we two

The aroma of rose oil
Brings our senses alive
With your love all around me
It's all I need to survive

Every love song I hear
Reminds me of you
To this haven I escape
Whenever I feel blue

How sensual are your hands
As I respond to your touch
The feeling is exquisite
It's almost too much

You clasp hold of my hands
As I look down on you
Into your beautiful blue eyes
What a lovely view

Such love we had made
But how sad was I to know
As we lay in love's sweet afterglow
That all of this wasn't real
It was only a dream
But oh how real did it seem?

(repost from March 2001)

Suetang

The Rusty Knight
Member

since 2001-08-29

Posts 414
Texas

1 posted 2001-09-03 09:16 PM

Most things start with a dream....and the closer the dream gets to reality the more real it seems. Very well put. *S*

Death comes not when we cease to breath, but when we cease to dream.

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

2 posted 2001-09-03 10:42 PM

say O YUH this was great

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