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If Tomorrow Never Came
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If Tomorrow Never Came |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“IF TOMORROW NEVER CAME” by Bill Charles ~~~~ I lie here and ponder, about your thoughts, what we could do, if today would never end… Just think, a day that lasts forever more, and all of our cares, had time to mend… Would all of the caring, come back to each, the parts that have been lost, over the years… And the visions, that we once dreamed, were once again found, without the tears… The sun in the sky shining, even if it rained, and drops that fell on our faces, were tears of bliss… The darkest night, would never again show its face, for the day would never stop, just like my kiss… Today would be always, but will two hearts still yearn, with the very special softness, that I remember was there… If tomorrow never came, would you look into my eyes, and say how it might be, to once again care… ~~~~ [This message has been edited by Bill Charles (edited 09-03-2001).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Bill I see that the romance sure hasn't gone out of your poetry! Beautiful speculative images of a deeply close relationship!! Well done my friend! |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Would all of the caring, come back to each, the parts that have been lost, over the years… And the visions, that we once dreamed, were once again found, without the tears… Bill, if this was written for someone specific, she needs to read it, and then Dear Poet, the FEELING of the day would never end..... excellent write. May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat... |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Bill, I think we all have wondered what might be if there was only to-day. Good writing. Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
This is so touching. So reflective. Tracey If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
If tomorrow never came, would you look into my eyes, and say how it might be, to once again care… ---------------------- If tomorrow never came..... would you still whisper my name.... ---------------- A very lovely and tenderly touching write.... I quite enjoyed it.... Thank you ***************************** "Oh...me!Oh Life! |
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GhostWriter_6 Member
since 2001-09-03
Posts 237??Amityville?? |
i loved this poem and the title fits the context.... keep up the good work... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Great writing...thoroughly enjoyed this one! ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice and romantic Bill...James |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
BC, you're reading my mind these days my friend. . . great job. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BillCharles~ 'will two hearts still yearn, with the very special softness, that I remember was there…' Chances are they will~ Very nicely said~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Very romantic and I love it. |
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