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It Takes Practice
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It Takes Practice |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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It Takes Practice I am hurting so much Thought I made that clear I’ll do my crying alone Best you don’t come near Asking can you help In your sweet caring way Again I shall refuse Better that you stay away Your heart reaching In each loving expression Offering me your light To my darker depression I heard every word You had left me thinking Although I remain low Heart broken and sinking Shrug your shoulders Remove the helping hand Because being ignored Is what I can understand Show me no sympathy Be amused with the fact The jokes are on me Displaying this happy act Humour hides pain Drowning in these tears I know how to smile I’ve practiced for years Hope ©2001 |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Hope..this is very well written. But don't turn your back on a friend. alan |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hope I guess there's no hope! According to this interesting write of yours. Just a smile to ease the pain....maybe I misunderstood....very well structured poem meter and rhyme excellent! |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Heart wrenching stuff. I know how to smile I've practiced for years Wonderfully expressed Tracey If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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