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Alan
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0 posted 2001-09-02 10:55 PM



As We Dance


We took a chance
Two strangers looking for romance
We made the choice to dance

As we danced
By your eyes I was entranced
The beauty of them enhanced

Arms entwined
I shut the world out of my mind
You and I are the universe

In the moonless sky
As my heart began to fly
The stars twinkled in delight

Our feeling soared to new heights
The creatures of the night
Sang us a song for lovers in flight

Holding you in the silky light
I will never forget the night
I danced with an angel

Alan aka Icyheart
May 4, 2001


© Copyright 2001 Alan - All Rights Reserved
catalinamoon
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1 posted 2001-09-02 11:06 PM


Well if your name was not Alan, I would think it had been me..
I have a wonderful memory of someone who I had such a special dance with..never forget these times.
Perfectly lyrical poem. Love it.
Sandra

Suetang
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2 posted 2001-09-02 11:08 PM


Alan
Your words epitomised love and romance as you captured the pure essence of what true love is all about....wonderfully written.
Take care.....Sue

Suetang

Tracey
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3 posted 2001-09-02 11:13 PM


Damn, there's a lot of good stuff out here tonight. I'm not kidding you Alan, I stuck a bottle of wine in the freezer, and forgot to take it out and it froze cause I was so busy reading all this great stuff.

This is heavenly. I'm entranced. Danced with an angel. I'm mesmorized  

Tracey

Alan
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4 posted 2001-09-02 11:13 PM


Cat..I am glad it brought back memories that were good..thank you

Sue..With what you said, you took my words away,I don't know what to say but Thank you

Alan
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5 posted 2001-09-02 11:15 PM


You sneaked in on me Tracey.I think that bottle was mine anyway..thanks for replying.
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Gaia
6 posted 2001-09-02 11:22 PM


What a wonderful way to say I love you... the dance of a lifetime.
I really like this poem, and glad you're going by Alan and not Icyheart, which doesn't fit the personality of the man who wrote this poem.

Alan
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7 posted 2001-09-02 11:29 PM


Midnitesun.thank you..glad you liked it
Dee
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8 posted 2001-09-02 11:57 PM


Arms entwined
I shut the world out of my mind
You and I are the universe

Alan, tender and romantic. Nothing icy about you that I can see. Loved this.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

Alan
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9 posted 2001-09-03 12:05 PM


Thank you Dee...I have my warm days..then i do have a few hot days..
jwesley
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10 posted 2001-09-03 12:10 PM


Yeah...think you opened a lot of memory banks Alan...had a couple of my own brought to fore...thanks for having me revisit them...

jwesley

Alan
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11 posted 2001-09-03 12:16 PM


thanks jwesley...glad I could..hope they were nice ones
Paula Finn
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12 posted 2001-09-03 02:11 AM


Oh this does bring back memories...thank you
Duncan
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13 posted 2001-09-03 02:36 AM


They're all angels when you're dancing.  May the music never end.  Great write.

[This message has been edited by Duncan (edited 09-03-2001).]

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