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As We Danced
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As We Danced |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
As We Dance We took a chance Two strangers looking for romance We made the choice to dance As we danced By your eyes I was entranced The beauty of them enhanced Arms entwined I shut the world out of my mind You and I are the universe In the moonless sky As my heart began to fly The stars twinkled in delight Our feeling soared to new heights The creatures of the night Sang us a song for lovers in flight Holding you in the silky light I will never forget the night I danced with an angel Alan aka Icyheart May 4, 2001 |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Well if your name was not Alan, I would think it had been me..  I have a wonderful memory of someone who I had such a special dance with..never forget these times. Perfectly lyrical poem. Love it. Sandra |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Alan Your words epitomised love and romance as you captured the pure essence of what true love is all about....wonderfully written. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Damn, there's a lot of good stuff out here tonight. I'm not kidding you Alan, I stuck a bottle of wine in the freezer, and forgot to take it out and it froze cause I was so busy reading all this great stuff. This is heavenly. I'm entranced. Danced with an angel. I'm mesmorized Tracey |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Cat..I am glad it brought back memories that were good..thank you Sue..With what you said, you took my words away,I don't know what to say but Thank you |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
You sneaked in on me Tracey.I think that bottle was mine anyway..thanks for replying. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a wonderful way to say I love you... the dance of a lifetime. I really like this poem, and glad you're going by Alan and not Icyheart, which doesn't fit the personality of the man who wrote this poem. |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Midnitesun.thank you..glad you liked it |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Arms entwined I shut the world out of my mind You and I are the universe Alan, tender and romantic. Nothing icy about you that I can see. Loved this. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Thank you Dee...I have my warm days..then i do have a few hot days.. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Yeah...think you opened a lot of memory banks Alan...had a couple of my own brought to fore...thanks for having me revisit them... jwesley |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
thanks jwesley...glad I could..hope they were nice ones |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh this does bring back memories...thank you |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
They're all angels when you're dancing. May the music never end. Great write. [This message has been edited by Duncan (edited 09-03-2001).] |
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