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dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

0 posted 2001-09-02 09:12 PM

i know
     that you require
     much more than this--
a tangible world
an old fashioned bliss

the distance between
keeps your heart at bay
     you wont allow
     your heart to stay

i cannnot ask
     my heart to wait
another moment
     may be too late

i've already fallen once--
               or twice, before
only to reach your closed
          guarded door

i know
     you require
          more than this
the warmth of body
blissful kiss,
for love to be a truth
     you know
for something valuable
     to grow

i've come to realize
that i do too...
i've dwelled in lonely
while love waits for you

     when you come by here
     call out to me
     i'll always hear you
     just wait and see

but love you, i cannot
with this perpetual ache
these moments of
          breakdown--
more than i can take

i took my risks
in loving you--
a thing you told me
not to do

but i dont own my heart,
               you see--
please love,
give it back to me...

i'll mend it a little
it'll be ok
i dont blame
          you
for my loving you
          this way

i'll learn to love you
as my dear friend
for friendship
doesnt have to end

i'll hold you
in the soul of me
if you'll let me
     i'd like for it to be

go now, and find
     your tangible space
touch love up close
kiss lips of face

i know love,
both of us needs more
i'm letting go--
but not locking the door...

-dgvarner
9-2-01

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"Live well
Laugh often
Love much"

Alan
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since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

1 posted 2001-09-02 09:15 PM

WOW Lady..this is heartfelt. it is sad when this happens. beautiful read
alan

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2001-09-02 09:44 PM

I echo Alan here...this is very powerful stuff!! Beautiful but so sad....great writing!

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

3 posted 2001-09-02 10:12 PM

Such an exquisite picture you painted from your palette of fine words and I loved each and every word. I hope you find the special love you're searching for. Take care....Sue

Suetang

DawnG

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since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

4 posted 2001-09-02 10:50 PM

Dg,

I had to say this to the man I loved three years ago. It was the hardest thing I'd ever had to do, but he and I've remained in touch. I know that I am a better person for having been in love with him, but also happy for him as he is now happily married to another. I understand your pain.

Dawn

Trillium

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since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

5 posted 2001-09-02 10:55 PM

Very moving and heart-felt! Good expression of what you are feeling.

Betty Lou Hebert

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

6 posted 2001-09-02 11:11 PM

Sob, my heart aches throughout this. So brave and so sad.
Sandra

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2001-09-02 11:18 PM

DG~
I love this romancing of the pen ...

'touch love up close'

Yep ... it's the only way to go~

Nice, DG ... real nice~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

8 posted 2001-09-03 12:29 PM

You know, it's a shame that something beautiful can be so sad --- then again, it's wonderful that even sadness can be made so beautiful.

jwesley

Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

9 posted 2001-09-03 12:59 PM

"Wrenchingly" good!
(and I like the new pic too)

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

10 posted 2001-09-03 01:02 AM

you know that third eye blind song "I never let you go" o yuh

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

11 posted 2001-09-03 01:18 AM

i know
     that you require
     much more than this--
a tangible world
an old fashioned bliss

the distance between
keeps your heart at bay
     you wont allow
     your heart to stay

i cannnot ask
     my heart to wait
another moment
     may be too late

i've already fallen once--
               or twice, before
only to reach your closed
          guarded door

i know
     you require
          more than this
the warmth of body
blissful kiss,
========================

this just breaks me mothy heart...
oh how well I know this ache.....
feeling every sincere rhyme of this touching write...
one of your best dg...
if only it was as easy as saying...
"Dont fall for me" ...
but youre on the right track, the friendship is always worth fighting for.
take care
jm

A man who asks a woman to lie for him, is a man who will lie to that woman.
A woman who lies for a man, is a woman who lies to herself.
(vise versa)

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

12 posted 2001-09-03 08:44 AM

ALAN..thank you sweet man..

ENCHANTRESS..thank you for beautiful..

SUE..very kind reply..i thank you much..

DAWN..you said it.."a better person for having loved.." thanks for reading..

BETTY LOU..was difficult to pull out that expression into poetry form..thank you..

SANDRA..thanks for feeling this one for a moment..

MISS MARGIE..i can touch love from a far, but only if there is some promise (i dont actually do promises..lol) of an "up close" love to come of it..thanks much..

JWES..i love your reply..thank you...

KRAW..and yours too..wow..wrenchingly? hmm (thank you on the new pic thing too..

)
WALTY!..cant believe youre gracing my poetry..cool..(cant think of that song right off..write down the words for me?) thanks for reading..

JM..one of my best? thanks! yes, i believe friendship is very important..people are important to me..i dont like to lose people..so, if i ever love you..i love you always...

hugs, g

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

13 posted 2001-09-03 09:50 AM

Very heartfelt.

Deb

The Rusty Knight
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 414
Texas

14 posted 2001-09-03 10:59 AM

Poignant, sad and beautifully put

Death comes not when we cease to breath, but when we cease to dream.

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

15 posted 2001-09-03 11:55 AM

I've dwelled in lonely

Man, it's crowded in that place

Think I've seen you there.

Beautiful, heart felt piece

Tracey

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

16 posted 2001-09-03 03:34 PM

i know
     that you require
     much more than this--
a tangible world
an old fashioned bliss

the distance between
keeps your heart at bay
     you wont allow
     your heart to stay

------------------------

A well-done heartfelt write.......so much heartfelt feelings......

I really enjoyed it....

Thank you
********************************

"Oh...me!Oh Life!
Of the questions of these recurring..........
Of myself forever reproaching myself,
for who more foolish than I......"
~Whitman~

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

17 posted 2001-09-04 08:26 PM

DEB..yes..definately felt this one deep down..thanks for reading..

RUSTY KNIGHT..thank you for your thoughtful reply..

(love your signature..

)
TRACEY..was that you i saw in lonely?? i thought you looked familiar..

thanks..
MYENCHANTED..glad you enjoyed..

thanks for reading..

hugs, g

rascalx
Senior Member

since 1999-08-25

Posts 590
Florence, SC, USA

18 posted 2001-09-05 01:15 AM

"i've dwelled in lonely
while love waits for you"

Those lines are so beautiful in their sadness... this whole poem is simply beautiful. You've touched something in me with this one. In "closing the door" to one world... one love... you've shown the way to another.
I agree... one of your best! I'll be bookmarking this one

- Jeff

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

19 posted 2001-09-06 01:52 AM

     when you come by here
     call out to me
     i'll always hear you
     just wait and see

but love you, i cannot
with this perpetual ache
these moments of
          breakdown--
more than i can take...

i know love,
both of us needs more
i'm letting go--
but not locking the door...

So much of this spoke to me as I sometimes speak to myself.

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

20 posted 2001-09-06 08:31 AM

JEFF..thanks for bookmarking me! lol

DUNCAN..are you talking to yourself again??

..you should email me next time you need to talk..lol

thanks for your replies..

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"youre not the only one who feels like this world's left you far behind.." t mcgraw

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

21 posted 2001-09-06 11:49 AM

Oh, yes! This is a keeper....

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

22 posted 2001-09-06 12:00 PM

dg-
   Hmmmmmm...well, I thought I had replied to this! LOL!
   So...I will NOW!

   I really like this one lots!
   Sometimes letting go is the most difficult
   thing to do even when we know it's the
   best thing for all concerned.
   But, then...you know that.
   Of course...you KNOW I can feel this one
   way down deep.
   Awesome write!

   Love and hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

[This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 09-06-2001).]

LngJhnAg
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since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

23 posted 2001-09-06 12:04 PM

dg - What a sweet poem! err, about that unlocked door? yanno, 'Deer lives in Florida - You might want to couple of deadbolts - lol

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

24 posted 2001-09-06 05:02 PM

DECA..thanks for keeping me! lol
TRICKS..thanks for awesome..

LNGJHN..thanks

'deer in fl? is he dangerous?? i'll work on those deadbolts! lol

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"youre not the only one who feels like this world's left you far behind.." t mcgraw

Parker
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since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
ON

25 posted 2001-11-09 12:26 PM

I'm so sorry I did not respond to this, it was too close me.

You write your heart so well.

Parker

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

26 posted 2001-11-09 12:57 PM

PARKER...i know how you are love...now that we're in the closet(the archives)..no one is watching--its easier to speak in a dark room..

but i appreciate your stopping back in to reply all the same..

i write my heart as my heart will let me write it..sometimes it takes years to put this heart into ink...other times, its so very plain and simple in its complexities...

thanks for coming back love...
lv,g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"am i in too deep--
have i lost my mind?
i dont care--
youre near, tonite..."
-enrique

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