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VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2001-07-10 06:56 PM

Morning
Virginia Salter

morning
window of opportunity
clean slate
new start
make a way in the new day
open wide the doors to avenues of change
one foot forward
then the next
marching out
into grand experiences
unique endeavors
challenges
dreams
accomplishments

but
the air is chill
I’m sneezing still
I’m almost comfortable here
in what I know
in what I do
I don’t want to face a zoo
of unknown things
of unknown times
of strange and
eerie anti-
rhymes
can’t
I remain
in like endeavor
not having to
be ultra
clever?
can
I or
can
I not?

© July 15, 2000

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-07-10 06:57 PM

I like your free verse, Virginia.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2001-07-10 06:59 PM

VAS - why not? Meet the new day with a newness of being. For this day will never be again...

BC

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2001-07-10 07:00 PM

nice free verse... you can guess I enjoyed...
look forward to seeing more

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

4 posted 2001-07-10 07:02 PM

Oh VAS, you just described my day tomorrow beautifully.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

5 posted 2001-07-10 07:09 PM

thanks, all, uh, don't I do a lot of free verse now? I confused...but then what's new? Sure happy you all liked!

This was written last year, heh heh heh

shadow974
Senior Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 636
Michigan

6 posted 2001-07-10 07:24 PM

Each new day is like a clean slate,nice poem.

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

7 posted 2001-07-10 08:14 PM

I enjoyed the anticipation and then trepidation you've captured Virginia ... very nicely done!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2001-07-10 10:11 PM

I don't believe I've seen your free verse before, I shall have to watch out for more!

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

9 posted 2001-07-13 01:30 AM

Now, you've got me looking forward unto tomorrow morning in anticipation of a clean slate, new opportunities, grand experiences, and starting out everything anew. This was a very positive poem to read. Thank you.

5_sweet_kisses
Junior Member

since 2001-04-20

Posts 49

10 posted 2001-07-13 01:50 AM

very nice poem, i liked it

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