Open Poetry #15 |
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Scirocco |
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Gwendrina Junior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 33 |
![]() Poetry once enveloped us in the desert air. I slipped your presence over my body like a dark robe hemmed with eternity. Together, we flared as one shadow on the sand. Sun filled the pale decanter of my neck and shoulders with a dreamer’s heat. You sipped its sweetness through my skin. and we swirled in gusts of illusion that blew, rippling time with our fingerprints They never touched the truth -- only grains of verse and ashes of moonlight fallen along the white dunes of morning. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GwenDrina~ Oh my ... this is lovely, lovely~ And I greatly enjoyed the blend of photo and thoughts~ Also your employ of the variant Scirocco gave the title that 'come in and see me' quality~ I did - and liked what I saw ~ Nicely done, poetess~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
What lovely words and such a beautiful pic. Thanks for sharing Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Wow - outstanding, and so lovely! Much applause, my friend. jwesley |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Gwen, Excellent write, nice pic! esp. liked: "and we swirled in gusts of illusion" Nice work. (And you had me fooled, I didn't know there was a variant to 'sirocco'.) [This message has been edited by Krawdad (edited 09-01-2001).] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Gwendrina- This is beautiful! ![]() Wonderfully penned verse. Enjoyed! ![]() hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautifully done! Lovely! |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
Poem and picture murge into one...making each more than it is on its own. very well done. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Gwendrina, a magnificent write! Thank you for sharing! [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 09-02-2001).] |
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Wes Utica Junior Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 28California |
This poem envelopes the reader and slips your presence over his mind. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Exotic and beautiful....Love the finality of the last verse! |
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