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Gwendrina
Junior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 33

0 posted 2001-09-01 03:59 PM

SCIROCCO

Poetry once
enveloped us in the desert air.

I slipped your presence
over my body
like a dark robe hemmed
with  eternity.

Together, we flared
as one shadow on the sand.

Sun filled
the pale decanter
of my neck and shoulders
with a dreamer’s heat.

You sipped its sweetness
through my skin.
and we  swirled
in gusts of illusion

that blew, rippling time
with our fingerprints

They  never touched
the truth --

only grains of verse
and ashes of moonlight fallen
along the white dunes of  morning.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2001-09-01 04:16 PM

GwenDrina~
Oh my ... this is lovely, lovely~

And I greatly enjoyed the blend of photo and thoughts~

Also your employ of the variant Scirocco
gave the title that 'come in and see me' quality~
I did - and liked what I saw ~
Nicely done, poetess~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

2 posted 2001-09-01 05:39 PM

What lovely words and such a beautiful pic.

Thanks for sharing

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

3 posted 2001-09-01 06:44 PM

Wow - outstanding, and so lovely! Much applause, my friend.

jwesley

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

4 posted 2001-09-01 11:40 PM

Gwen,
Excellent write, nice pic!
esp. liked:
"and we swirled
in gusts of illusion"
Nice work.
(And you had me fooled, I didn't know there was a variant to 'sirocco'.)

[This message has been edited by Krawdad (edited 09-01-2001).]

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

5 posted 2001-09-02 12:28 PM

Gwendrina-
   This is beautiful!
   Wonderfully penned verse.
   Enjoyed!

   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

6 posted 2001-09-02 12:56 PM

Very beautifully done! Lovely!

The Rusty Knight
Member

since 2001-08-29

Posts 414
Texas

7 posted 2001-09-02 01:53 AM

Poem and picture murge into one...making each more than it is on its own. very well done.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2001-09-02 04:50 PM

Gwendrina, a magnificent write! Thank you for sharing!

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 09-02-2001).]

Wes Utica
Junior Member

since 2000-08-12

Posts 28
California

9 posted 2001-09-02 06:21 PM

This poem envelopes the reader and slips your presence over his mind.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

10 posted 2001-09-02 06:45 PM

Exotic and beautiful....Love the finality of the last verse!

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