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MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

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In a corporeal internship...

0 posted 2001-09-01 12:01 PM

My fingers
Massage

Desire
Forming

Delicious sighs

Interactive
Breathing

Fragile soul merging

(Copyright 2001 by: MARK V SHELDON)

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS

MyEnchanted_Melody
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since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

1 posted 2001-09-01 01:00 PM

Fragile soul merging

----------------

And my fragile soul today enjoys this....

Mark.....I really love your (Twenty or less)...few words that say so much.....

Thank you
*******************

"Oh...me!Oh Life!
Of the questions of these recurring..........
Of myself forever reproaching myself,
for who more foolish than I......"
~Whitman~

SmittenKitten
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since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

2 posted 2001-09-01 01:23 PM

mmm...delicious. My skin tingles at the very thought. Tenderly written with the fewest, but most impactive (hehe, that's probably not even a word!) words

Beautiful...
~Krista

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you.
And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie the Pooh

rwood
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since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

3 posted 2001-09-01 01:43 PM

Now that's what I call key strokes! Penned very seductively.

Sincerely,
Regina

Voiceless
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since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

4 posted 2001-09-01 01:58 PM

This may be lacking numerous words
but it's not at all lacking beauty.

Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial)

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2001-09-01 02:11 PM

Wonderful...James

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

6 posted 2001-09-01 02:33 PM

My Melody:  ...then consider it a "gift for your soul today".  Thank you for the kind words.

Krista, the thoughts are indeed tantilizing...  Thank you for the "tingles".

Regina:  TOUCHE! :-] (Actually, it was "typed with a seductive touch"...) ;->

Voiceless:  Beauty is a wonderful destination...  Thank you.

Thank you, James.

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

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The Shores of Alone

7 posted 2001-09-01 04:59 PM

Mark you need to go over to "Adult" and really let loose! Wow, this was subtle but so sensual. Mmmmm.
Sandra

MARK V SHELDON
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In a corporeal internship...

8 posted 2001-09-01 05:02 PM

Sandra, that apple sounds mighty tasty... but I'm fasting with Time, remember? ;->

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS

[This message has been edited by MARK V SHELDON (edited 09-01-2001).]

VAS
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Oregon

9 posted 2001-09-01 07:59 PM

whoa, this is warm

the only thing I found myself wondering about is that it seems soul should have an 's' because to merge, more than one entity is needed

your thoughts?

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

10 posted 2001-09-01 09:20 PM

Perhaps it only takes one soul to do the merging? My my..is it warm in here tonight?

MARK V SHELDON
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In a corporeal internship...

11 posted 2001-09-01 10:14 PM

Virginia, you're getting warmer... but I was picturing the amalgamation after the merger has taken place as in: fragile soul-merging, but I left the hyphen out to leave room for interpretation, for that is the beauty of this form -- punctuation being optional leaves more to the imagination to fill... Thanks for the read and reply.

Enchantress, you might also have a point, as well as the fact that that line could simultaneously represent each individual soul's point of view too... (They say steam is good for "better breathing"... ;-> )

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

12 posted 2001-09-02 05:06 PM

So many good reasons to catch your every poem...

enjoyed!

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

13 posted 2001-09-02 05:59 PM

Happy you "caught it", Sunshine...

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS

ethome
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New Brunswick Canada

14 posted 2001-09-02 07:23 PM

Hey Mark! When that desire gets forming and that interactive breathing gets going then you need to call the passion bomb squad or just let youself explode with it!

MARK V SHELDON
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In a corporeal internship...

15 posted 2001-09-02 07:47 PM

Hmmm, Eric -- I didn't know that there WAS a "passion bomb squad"... sounds like a blast!

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS

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