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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-09-02 10:04 PM


A heart without love is like
a garden without flowers
a tree without leaves
a fire without warmth
or a galaxy without stars

And for me to be without you
would be like a song without words
a musician without his instrument
an angel without wings
or a soul without its core

But in your presence I am capable
of anything as I am lead
by the guiding light of your love
You are the icing on my cake
the colors in my rainbow
the jewel in my crown
the music in my heart
the burning ember in my fire
and the substance of my soul

Suetang

© Copyright 2001 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Alan
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1 posted 2001-09-02 10:11 PM


Sue....this is beautiful. i enjoyed it.
alan

DawnG
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2 posted 2001-09-02 10:52 PM


Sue,

This is absolutely beautiful. You are a very lucky woman to have such a love to inspire such beautiful poetry as this.

                                Dawn

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3 posted 2001-09-02 10:56 PM


Very pretty poem!  I enjoyed reading it.

Betty Lou Hebert

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