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BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

0 posted 2001-07-15 10:19 PM

The Mountains say Nothing

Silence, cold silence in the blue mountain mist
ancient hills have no need for words
creation trembles at the magnitude of this
between my fingers the wind runs
I stand in awe
as I feel the need to reach for the top
if I had wings I'd go
I would listen to the silence
and learn
~*~
BloomingRose

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

1 posted 2001-07-15 10:22 PM

BloomingRose-
   Great to see you here!
   This is so beautifully penned..
   I love it.

   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2001-07-15 10:31 PM

BloomingRose~
You reach new heights in this piece~

'I would listen to the silence
and learn'

So serene to learn from the silence~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2001-07-16 12:29 PM

between my fingers the wind runs
I stand in awe
as I feel the need to reach for the top
if I had wings I'd go
I would listen to the silence
and learn
=====================
what a wonderful poem of imagery and spirit
also of wisdom found in natures gifts
beautiful Deb!!!
so nice to have you back with us.

When your own emptiness is all thats getting through
There comes a point when youre not sure why youre still talking
I passed that point long ago

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

4 posted 2001-07-16 01:47 AM

JM chose the section that I most enjoyed. Wonderful piece, BR. Great to see you here, seems like you've been gone awhile but it might just be my timing.

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

5 posted 2001-07-16 02:43 PM

Vicky~ Thank you! I have been to the Blue Ridge Mountains this last week, and it was son peacful. Great to be back.

Marge~ The serenity in the mountains leaves you breathless. Thank you for your kind words.

Jm~ You are right, there is much wisdom to be found in the gift of nature.

VAS~ Thank you so much!

Mike
Member Elite

since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

6 posted 2001-07-16 10:51 PM

nicely written, enjoyed your vision, thank your for sharing.

Flutterwings
Member

since 2001-07-10

Posts 288
Maine

7 posted 2001-07-17 10:17 AM

I hear, I see and feel the emotion of nature's wonder in every single poetic word.
I much enjoyed the journey!

Love and peace ((~.~))

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

8 posted 2001-07-17 10:44 AM

Ah... this so reminded me of things I have felt...
Excellent work...

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

9 posted 2001-07-17 01:56 PM

Mike~ Thanks for reading. I am glad you enjoyed.

Flutterwings~ I love nature too.

Thanks.

Cpat~ Thank you, I hope you felt the breeze too.

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