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poem - Mass Collaboration in the PIP Chat Room
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poem - Mass Collaboration in the PIP Chat Room |
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PoemCrazy Member
since 2000-11-30
Posts 159 |
hi! okay, this is a strange one. while trying out the PIP chat room, the following people decided to try a mass collaboration on a poem. (walt provided sound effects) . . logan mysteria paula finn michael auguste coco baci serenity poemcrazy . . this is the result, which is in basically "raw" form, and has only been edited a bit. . . . "moonlight" lunar delight, shines at midnight. dusk to dawn, wrapping soft brushes of glow to your skin, highlighting your beauty now and then, sending a shiver of starlite across skys blushing cheek, ebony dust settling onto the lids of skys closing eyes, she rests in the twilight of dreamtimes soft sighs. He tempts with embraces, her heart to caress, and she in her dreamstate finds will so much less, translucent and flowing, her gown trimmed in lace, she moves ever closer, desire warms her face, in need of his arms to be held in embrace, pleading a hunger...a want to be filled. . . . here's a fun thing to try: guess who did which part(s)...tom and Dopey_Dope, who bowed out in the middle, you still owe a line or two! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
This was such excellent fun...y'all ought to come play |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You folks are having fun...get back in there and work on it a bit...I notice a blip or two, but it's going to be a wonderful collaboration when completed! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I just loved hearing everybody's voice!!!! and for the record, Michael Auguste is one of the MOST patient poets I have ever encountered!!! Was much fun---just sorry that I wasn't more help!  |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
o yuh where am i saying "coco baci coco baci..." heheh fun deal |
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Auguste 
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
coco baci, coco baci, coco baci, coco baci, coco baci, coco baci, coco baci, YUH... It really WAS a lot of fun and I hope more of you will come join in. serenity, you're too sweet, but thank you anyway and thanks guys for an enjoyable evening. Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
It was fun! Hope those in the chatroom will try to do another one, pssst, I know who did what! ~If you have a choice to sit down or dance, I hope that you dance~ |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
PoemCrazy, it was a blast and oh it was soooo sweet 2meetUp with our PoetFriends in the wee hours of this morn... *~coco~* |
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PoemCrazy Member
since 2000-11-30
Posts 159 |
Hi! thanks for the comments and the opportunity. Paula: Alicat has scheduled another mass session for the 28th, maybe we can re-invent epic poetry with a few lines from everyone? Sunshine: perhaps the blips are caused by your absence? hmmm? Serenity: more help? ok, you start the next one. wayoutwalt: it wouldn't record, but i'll figure it out. that program can do a minute of audio, can you? Auguste: more? hey, it was a challenge to coordinate this time! Mysteria: quite fun! you know who did what? tell me! Cocobaci: sorry about the jello incident thanks...tom |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Heh...this was pretty darn good guys...though it did stumble a bit. It's very interesting to see the many different writing styles interwoven so wonderfully. I'd be interested to see how the next one turns out. |
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