Open Poetry #15 |
You're With Me |
Kitty** Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428Charlottesville,VA USA |
* You're with me * In the shadows of the night, I let my mind drift . I'm alone, but you are here. I feel your heartbeat. I feel your breath upon my cheek. I see you. I see the twinkle in your grey eyes. I hear your teasing voice and I hear your laughter. And I want you. I want the reality of you. I'm alone, but for always * you're with me * ! If you can't make it so, |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Oh...sweet... Nice to see you again, Kitty. |
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Qumar Fatthi Member
since 2001-05-20
Posts 59Pakistan |
nice good effort please carry on....... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kitty~ I do like that breath upon my cheek'~ Nicely done. Good to see you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
such a close relationship is an awesome thing. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Kitty- What lovely thoughts you've penned.. Nicely done.. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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