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dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

0 posted 2001-08-30 07:59 PM

sleep with me...
feel the feathers
of my pillow

seek me
     reach me
grope restlessly
          to touch me

find me
     in your arms
     seeping into your soul
          listening
     at the door to your heart

stray with me
          dream me
          dream
               with
                    me
here i will find
                    you

show me
where you want to drift...

stay with me
come
sigh
     with
          me
gather me into your
          closeness
     in the stillness

sleep
     with
          me...

-dgvarner
8-30-01

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"i believe we are here for a reason.
as each day unfolds,
we see less of the shadow
and more of the sun"  -unknown

[This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 08-30-2001).]

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

1 posted 2001-08-30 08:35 PM

Reads like an inviting lullaby. I like the style very much.

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

2 posted 2001-08-30 09:01 PM

now this is an invite I like. (wink) Great job lady...truly enjoyed it
alan

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2001-08-30 11:58 PM

DG~
Oh ... I like !

'listening
at the door to your heart'

Especially this ....
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

4 posted 2001-08-31 12:36 PM

dg,
I'm enjoying the structure you are using of late.
And this is quite a generous invitation . . .

Parker
Member Elite

since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
ON

5 posted 2001-08-31 12:55 PM

Well this is an invitation. who could resist, not I.

Parker

rascalx
Senior Member

since 1999-08-25

Posts 590
Florence, SC, USA

6 posted 2001-08-31 02:48 AM

gale,
I love this!

The rythym of this poem...almost like waves..slowly and gently pulling me into your shore. I especially love the lines "find me in your arms..seeping into your soul...listening at the door to your heart". What a beautiful visual! Very well done!
- Jeff

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2001-08-31 04:20 AM

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

8 posted 2001-08-31 05:14 AM

Inviting does seem to be the word, a delicate write I think. Wondefully done as always my friend, take care!

"Let me pierce the realm of glamour
So I know just what I am." ~ Van Morrison

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

9 posted 2001-08-31 08:29 AM

DG, this is wonderful. It does tend to lull one into something.

I really enjoyed the style too.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

10 posted 2001-09-01 06:33 PM

DUNCAN..a lullaby huh...you gettin sleepy?

glad you enjoyed..
thanks ALAN..

glad you stopped in for the invite ..

MARGIE GIRL..thanks a bunch miss poet lady

KRAW..thank you friend..

PARKER..no resisting necessary..lol

RASCAL..surf much? glad you enjoyed the waves..

PASSINGSHADOWS..thanks for the

!!
EAGLE..thank you my friend

good to have you visit..
DEE..i thank you..

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"Live well
Laugh often
Love much"

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

11 posted 2001-09-01 11:43 PM

Hi Dgvarner,

"find me
     in your arms
     seeping into your soul
          listening
     at the door to your heart"

This is awesome and this one stanza I just love, wonderful imagery in this as well, enjoyed.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

12 posted 2001-09-01 11:47 PM

Hey...dg did I get your address?
How the heck am I gonna smother you in all that closeness if I can't find you?
Delightful poem....a joy to read.....warm and sensuous!

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

13 posted 2001-09-02 02:08 PM

CERENITY..thank you so much..

i'm glad you enjoyed..
ETHOME..LOL@you! no..you never would show up on msn..so i deleted your bum..lol never know..you mightve gotten my address....teehee
thanks for reading friend..

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"Live well
Laugh often
Love much"

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

14 posted 2001-09-02 05:34 PM

dg-
   This is awesome!
   Started to pick out my favorite parts,
   but it turned out to be the whole poem!
   I just love the whole feel of this one.
   It's great to see you writing again.
   I've missed you bunches!

   Love you,
   ~Me

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

[This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 09-02-2001).]

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

15 posted 2001-09-03 06:01 PM

thanks CHICKY BABE! always good to be writing..

and always good to get a reply from you! glad you liked this one ..

hugs,g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"Live well
Laugh often
Love much"

[This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 09-03-2001).]

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