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Bed of Stone
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Bed of Stone |
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Kitty** Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428Charlottesville,VA USA 
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I lie upon this bed of stone, that use to be so soft and warm. Memories plaque, my heart and head, I toss upon this stone cold bed. What use to be, is now no more. My love, you walk a distant shore. I relive the seeds we've sown, lying on this bed of stone. If you can't make it so, |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Kitty...I think I borrowed your bed last night. YOu can have it back anytime. I do relate to this poem very much. Although it is sad, you have written it well. Good job alan |
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Kitty** Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428Charlottesville,VA USA |
Alan, That bed is 'AWFUL' isn't it...??? I hope you never have to borrow it again.. Wishing only the best for you!! And thanks for your response. Kitty |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
It would seem like uncomfortable stone because of the pain....nice metaphorical poem! |
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