Open Poetry #15 |
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Brave Hearts |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart ![]() |
Brave Hearts come, and then, come again walk ye halls then walk thy glen traverse with me a mist of mile soon be here, so spend the while pleas are but once renewed see through fogs that visit you ah me bonny, winsome child it has been some since the wild of yesteryear we bore lament though gave not in to torment we held us strong in our cleave now hootin’ owls toll our eve this land, this realm, it gives us rest come now my bonny to a breast, to sleep soft, thus cleave to one bringing life with morning’s sun sustenance shall bring to thee with songs we sing, merrily no fog brings forth to you a dirge escaping diseased mists that surged forth with claim for any name new countries shall hold our fame come, and then, come again walk ye halls then walk thy glen this land anew shall be our start for we’ve come with strong, brave hearts |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Just love this verse....the rest is very good too but this one stuck in my mind!! "ah me bonny, winsome child it has been some since the wild of yesteryear we bore lament though gave not in to torment we held us strong in our cleave now hootin’ owls toll our eve" Great stuff Karilea......love the style! Must be the Scots woman coming out in you. You might Robert Burns long lost great + some greats grandaughter! |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
good stuff..nice style and nice flow..a good read!! |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
This one dances into the heart. I love the flow and message of adventure and courage. Wonderful Karilea! Sincerely, Regina |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Wonderful, so you think you really can start over? I so hope it's true. This is very inspirational, I feel about to embark upon a new journey, just from the read. Sandra |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Fabulous piece of writing, Karilea! Wonderful! |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Beautiful sunshine...I love the thoughts of being able to start over. Great read. alan |
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