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Open Poetry #15

You would feel soft

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-08-30 07:24 AM

Your long hair
would feel soft
on my fingertips
Soft curves
my hands
won't want to leave
Your eyes
seductively
glance at me
I dare not look
afraid to get hooked
Feeling your stare
caressing me
I refuse it
don't acknowledge it
and walk away.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-08-30 08:52 AM

ah walker... captures something of the fear and the loss... nicely penned!

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

2 posted 2001-08-30 04:04 PM

Great capture of just a moment...before walking away.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2001-08-30 05:07 PM

Enjoyed! Leaves me wondering why he walked away....I like that, nice touch.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

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