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walker
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since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-08-30 07:18 AM



With your kisses
I surrender
everything
I'll ever be
Only you I want
to breath
Your air
leads me
I feel alive
I find unique pleasures
in your arms
I don't want to ever part
from this love
it's mine.

© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
1 posted 2001-08-30 08:28 AM


So definitive, I like it. I hope you can keep it all.
Sandra

ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
2 posted 2001-08-30 08:30 AM


Tenderly but succinctly written!  Well done Walker...I could feel the heat!!
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2001-08-30 04:18 PM


Most of us want a love to call our own...James
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
4 posted 2001-08-30 05:10 PM


Oh yes!! To be loved so completely! Very nice.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

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