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Open Poetry #15

It's mine

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-08-30 07:18 AM

With your kisses
I surrender
everything
I'll ever be
Only you I want
to breath
Your air
leads me
I feel alive
I find unique pleasures
in your arms
I don't want to ever part
from this love
it's mine.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

1 posted 2001-08-30 08:28 AM

So definitive, I like it. I hope you can keep it all.
Sandra

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2001-08-30 08:30 AM

Tenderly but succinctly written! Well done Walker...I could feel the heat!!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2001-08-30 04:18 PM

Most of us want a love to call our own...James

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2001-08-30 05:10 PM

Oh yes!! To be loved so completely! Very nice.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

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