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cottage
Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 138

0 posted 2001-08-30 04:06 AM

I
am
drawn
to the beauty
of your words that
spoke with unfailing passion
I’ve breathed new life as I took the first
dose of your poem…I laughed as you teased,
cried as you pleaded, you’ve filled me to make me feel
this you in you and the me in me…you’re a diamond
that sparkled for me when my world was
in total darkness…that star which
shone and pointed where
you could be reached
I’m glad that
I found
U

[This message has been edited by cottage (edited 08-31-2001).]

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2001-08-30 04:31 AM

Enjoyed your poem cottage...James

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

2 posted 2001-08-30 06:54 PM

You've stylishly penned a special verse for a special someone! I'm so glad you shared! Many smiles

Sincerely,
Regina

shadow974
Senior Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 636
Michigan

3 posted 2001-08-30 07:00 PM

Nicely done, enjoyed.

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.
ARAB PROVERB

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

4 posted 2001-08-30 07:10 PM

welcome to passions

enjoy

cottage
Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 138

5 posted 2001-08-31 02:47 AM

thank you all for your encouragement

rwood, in fact this was written about everyone in passion... I am a fan of everybody here, thank you for sharing your beautiful words.

love,
cottage

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2001-08-31 04:10 AM

Cottage~
I think this is BEAUTIFUL~

Love the shape and it's so effective
with the 'diamond' reference~

And it's wonderful to have you here~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2001-08-31 04:12 AM

awesome awesome....like it like it

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

8 posted 2001-08-31 04:19 AM

cottage-
   Wow...this is beautiful!
   Love the way you've formatted it!
   Very nicely done!

   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

cottage
Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 138

9 posted 2001-08-31 04:22 AM

marge and passing shadows, so glad that u've stopped by.

marge, here's a big WINK to you, thank you for your great suggestion!

love,
cottage

cottage
Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 138

10 posted 2001-08-31 04:36 AM

thanks so much vicky!

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