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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 I feel you with me I know you are here my skin is humming ~ coming….alive with just a thought I’ve brought you here my devil my demon my fantasy I feel you start to play with me touching me in places no one else can reach cause I don’t let them in there I wouldn’t know how I wouldn’t dare or maybe I realize they don’t care I turn my shy eyes away from the pain they’ve created and slowly allow your heat to burn ~ no, soothe this ache so deep now say that again softly, yes…….. promise to keep what you have taken leave my soul ~ shaken ~ when you whisper baby………… ~SEA~ |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Oh Sea this is a hot one, oh BABY!!!!!!!   A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. Bernie Slicker [This message has been edited by bslicker (edited 08-30-2001).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Much too brief, on a sleepless night. I hate the dog days of summer---it's not the heat, it's the humidity! Grinning... what an early morning write...smiles and hugs |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
SeaSweetie, this is a captivating poem and a treat4me2read b4 I catch my z's... Hugs2UalwaysPoetFriend *~coco~* |
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cottage Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 138 |
I simply love this, SEA! |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
...I turn my shy eyes away... Shy? This is a rare side of you. ...to burn ~ no, soothe... Love is confusing. Seriously, I enjoyed this very much ... baby Melton |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
SEA Beautiful like always......i feel same even reading you after a long time |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sea, Sweet dreams my pretty. Enjoyed |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
WHEW ... WHAT was the name of that cold medicine??? I need to put it in me raspberry tea  Jon's gonna want you to have a cold more often LOL(you know--sick in bed)  very very groovy writing here Sea-girlie sweet dreams indeed "oh you speak to me in riddles |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Very nice~ You play the words softly~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Been so long since I've called a Lover Baby, always seems appreciated. Enjoyed. The photo looks like the sweet sorrow of parting. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wow, thanks, I'm glad you guys liked this one hey Janet, LOL maybe after I am not so snotty LOL it's that night time coughing, aching, stuffy head, fever, so you can rest medicine LOL, and last night, it DID NOT WORK!! LOL from what I understand, actually, it can be pretty good in tea thank you all very much and RSW, 'baby' always works for me [This message has been edited by SEA (edited 08-30-2001).] |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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