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darabeth
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since 2001-02-17
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0 posted 2001-08-29 10:41 PM


You're out there
I know.
I feel you
in the wind.
In the air
I breathe.
You are there
with arms open.

Your spirit
holds me close.
I feel the love
the warmth
of you.
Your tenderness
lives in me.

One day soon
we will join.
Together as one
like before.
Hold me
sweet spirit.
For love
does last,Forever.

          Dara Beth

© Copyright 2001 darabeth - All Rights Reserved
Moon Dust
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1 posted 2001-08-29 10:43 PM


awwww what a sweet tribute to a lost love

You don't have a choice to die but you do have a choice how you meet it.


darabeth
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2 posted 2001-08-29 10:52 PM


Thank you Moon for the reply.I believe that everyone has a lost love at some point in their life.Thank you again.

               Dara Beth  

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3 posted 2001-08-30 12:57 PM


I see this as waiting for someone you've yet to meet...loved it by the way!  
ethome
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4 posted 2001-08-30 01:21 AM


Great searching theme to this poem....I have to agree with the idea!  
Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2001-08-30 01:53 AM


DaraBeth~
Very gently done~
I like the touch of spirit feel~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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