Open Poetry #15 |
Spirit |
darabeth Junior Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 33 |
You're out there I know. I feel you in the wind. In the air I breathe. You are there with arms open. Your spirit holds me close. I feel the love the warmth of you. Your tenderness lives in me. One day soon we will join. Together as one like before. Hold me sweet spirit. For love does last,Forever. Dara Beth |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
awwww what a sweet tribute to a lost love You don't have a choice to die but you do have a choice how you meet it. |
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darabeth Junior Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 33 |
Thank you Moon for the reply.I believe that everyone has a lost love at some point in their life.Thank you again. Dara Beth |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I see this as waiting for someone you've yet to meet...loved it by the way! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great searching theme to this poem....I have to agree with the idea! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DaraBeth~ Very gently done~ I like the touch of spirit feel~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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