Homing (A Beacon of Light)

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Open Poetry #15

Homing (A Beacon of Light)

rwood
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since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

0 posted 2001-08-29 08:51 PM

The man stands in crystal
Within a perfect storm

The upward spiraling of familiar
Makes him feel unnoticed in the echoing hall

He has no idea

His beacon may just be
The spotlight of his affection

If only he could see
The homing

Without his solitude
Never would he paint the walls
Inside

A map
Of treasure
He, cannot even find
Sometimes

But still he tries
And how wonderfully
His relief

reads

When he leaves

Homing

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

1 posted 2001-08-29 08:59 PM

Very cool write, Regina...I definitely enjoyed the style in this...awesome pic, too! Great job!

sp

tried to write a letter
to tell you how I feel,
but all I kept on writing
was slipping on the tears from the day...

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2001-08-29 10:09 PM

RWood~
I love everything about this piece~

Do you know the geographical location of that Lighthouse ?
Inquiring minds want to know ! !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2001-08-29 10:14 PM

what a very cool poem...
a poem of serenity....quiet comfort...
and that pic fascinates the heck out of me..
a sundial under the water?? WAAAAY COOL

"oh you speak to me in riddles
and you speak to me in rhymes
my body aches to breathe your breath
your words keep me alive"

~Sarah McLachlan~

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